This is not my final version this is what i aim to have it look like the writing that i have put over the footage is what i want to narrated over the top this will give it more of a professional feel the editing will also be alot more sharper.

I also look to add transitions towards the footage this will make it eye catching not decided what i will use just yet but i will try a few of them and pick which one i think looks better, i am also getting a piece of music specially made for my advert